Thesis Statement: To me getting up early in the morning and started to work is better than getting up later and working until late at night.
Supporting ideas:
Reason for 1: If we get up early we can finish our tasks earlier and spend much time with our friends or family.
Reason 2: In the morning brain works properly and effectively but at night we start to have difficulty in doing our tasks.
Reason 3: As everbody knows, getting up early is healtier than sleeping late.
Opposing ideas:
Reason 1: Some people doesn't like getting up early so they prefer getting up later.
Reason 2: According to some people working at night is better because they think that at night it is silent and they can concentrate on their task well.
Reason 3: Nowadays many people are accustomed to getting up late so it becomes their lifestyle.
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Your thesis statement is "To me getting up early in the morning and started to work is better than getting up later and working until late at night." But why? Please write about your reasons in phrases.
ReplyDeleteYour supporting sentences and opposing ideas are clearly written.
However, you haven't written how you refute the opposing ideas. You should write, people against me think like this; however, their ideas are insufficient, irrelevant, etc. After adding this to your outline, you can write your paragraph.